Short Story of the week! 1.0

I stopped. Heart pounding in my chest. Lungs burning like a fire set deep inside them."Don’t stop. Don’t stop. Run." , I thought to myself.My feet wouldn’t obey. A shiver crept up my spine like a spider tickling my senses with its many tiny legs. It was the name on the old brick wall, my name, that scared me more than anything. Anna. Thick red letters about a foot tall shown in the security light of the alley. My hand shook as I touched the cold, wet A. The viscous substance coated my fingertip, its metallic smell leaving its mark on my taste buds without ever touching my tongue. My stomach retched. Blood. Swiping my hand across the denim of my jeans, I felt it dampen my skin underneath and I wanted to scream.

I caught a glimpse of the abandoned car I’d left at the end of the alley. The Escort was useless now. Out of gas and of life, it sat there helplessly, unable to give me what I needed most, to get the hell out of here. I gripped the handle to the snubbed nosed revolver tighter. It weighed a little heavier in my hand.“You are mine, Anna.”A dark figure came out of the shadows from the other side of the alley. I wanted to run but thought better of it as I felt the mark on my neck burn like someone was pressing a lit cigarette onto my skin. “Please. You can’t make me do this.” I say to the man raising the gun. All i see is the white, freakishly scary smile on the man's face coming closer and closer. The figure stopped before me, i hesitate to pull the trigger to my gun, the man grabs my hands and twists it, making me drop my gun. I cringe in terror thinking of whats going to happen next, the man turns me around swiftly and leans me on the car. With his free his, he starts to rub my hip, then my legs. A tear drop falls of my face as i think of how i got myself in the situation.

The man starts to put his hand in my pants, as soon as he does i hear a gun shot, the the sound of the man's body hit the floor. I quickly turn around to see the man face down in a pile of his own blood, with a bullet hole in the back of his head. I look up from the body only to see Fred. My eyes widen and i rush to him. As Fred stands there motionless and empty I rush over and cling onto him. "I thought you had died Fred!" I start to cry at the mere fact of the craziness that had just happened. "Lets get outta here Anna", Fred says as he drops the gun, turns around, puts his hand over me, and walks with me to civilization.

woah ...that was the sexiest short story i ever read, Ura-kun!


Great Job!

lol it was pretty sexy....confused the crap outta me tho:D

and really Leviathan? adult swim? really? lol

thx guys....ill write one next week!

ok:D

dont confuse me next time lol but good job:D

read it carefully and u wont get confused
why u confused?

she was saying "how did i get in this crazy situation." and stuff.......but you didnt explain......sorry to criticise lol

well yeah....

i mean just imagine it as a part of a bigger story...

olike i ripped out a page of a book, and wrote it down...

...thats how i like to write short stories.

oh ok. thats awesome. i like that approach better.....now that i know. before i thought you were being kind of.........*bangs hand against chest* R-tarded! lol

but no, seriously, it was pretty good.

well there will be another next week!

AWWW Pirate lolcat ish awasome ..creepy eyes though xD

That kitty is not scary compared to this guy
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that bear freaks me the fuck outO.o

and how did this come up? lol