A bit disappointed and sad

I'm getting sad, no one is looking at the first short story I posted here =\
Either I'm as bad as I think I am, or no one has noticed. I hope someone looks at it soon, or eventually...it is one of my favorites.

I doubt that it's because you've written a bad story or anything like that. Rather... It's probably due to the fact that this place is kind of like a ghost town.

Except ghost towns are much more lively.

Anywho, I'll take a look at it and give you some feedback, if possible.

True enough...but thank you, I look forward to what you think and have to say.